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I finally took a sit on the thinkin' chair and pooped out this little nugget.
Gettin ready for Easter, too. :/
A perfect loop
Have to say this actually turned out to be a great loop. She leaves and then comes back to it while laying there seductively for a moment. She hears something, goes to investigate and comes right back to the same flower again. I think this could have been a bit better with sounds though. As in adding a sound to show why she left and then possibly the sound of her wings flapping as she left. Then another sound for when she comes back to lay down.
The graphics were fairly nice though. The background and flowers looked really nice as well. Her outfit looked pretty cool and she seemed to have a calm yet playful face on her.
I would have to say that overall this is a great loop and shows you had potential but a few sound effects could make this a bit better.
Thanks! I was mostly playing around with flash, I'm glad it turned out the way it did.
Other than the obvious things, such as not being very long and that it doesn't have a story, it's very good.
You're drawing style is very impressive and you're background is detailed.
You could try looking at other loops and possibly next time you could a mini-story that never ends.
So's the landscape.
And that's about it, "rely"
well, this one got some potential
for a longer animation.
What will be great if you
I liked it
I really enjoyed how you drew her. In fact I think this would make a great screensaver! This is one of the most pleasing loops I've seen.
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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