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I don't know what to say.. Just that it's my first movie and I hope you like it)
Well, if this is your first movie, gratz, you made a good start!
Your artwork seems to be good, it's a bit hard to say since there are (almost) no graphics but the beast itself. But the creature is drawn just fine, so I guess I spot some talent there :-)
The music fits, and what I like most of all is the message your movie has. Btw, my inner beast try to stop me from writing this, so I just knocked it out cold ;-)
My only problem is that the movie runs a bit laggy on my PC, and the whole animation is a bit slow-paced all in all, but I give you 4/5 points, and 8/10 stars, I hope to see some more movies of you soon!
Thanks) I happy you like it)
5/5 and 10/10 , I just like it so much... looking forward your next movie)))
Tlo'ko mne kajetsa vse je stoilo perevesti nadpisi na fone, bojus dl'a teh kto velikoogo i mogu4ego ne znaet efekt budet ne polnim)))
Da, navernoe nado bilo, no esli chestno bilo len')
Da i ya bi tochno chto-to namudrila kak s nachalom ><
Pretty awesome for a first
That's pretty awesome for your first flash movie! About the only thing I found to complain about was the somewhat sub-par English; I'm assuming it's not your native language, especially since you put an Asian character on one of the bars.
The opening, for example, could say "In the heart of each of us lives a beast who feasts on spite and detestation. I'll show you which kind of beast lives inside of me." - by the way, detestation is a fairly rare word, I wasn't even sure it existed 'till I googled it. Maybe use a more common one such as 'abhorrence'? The end should be closer to "And what does your beast look like?"
As for animation, it was pretty smooth and awesome. The music fit fairly well, and it only felt a bit clunky here and there. Definitely keep animating, I personally think you will do very well in it if you keep going! ^.=.^
Yes, I really don't know eng well) But i accept your advices))
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