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Part two of two
hi my english got better and i fixed some stuff up.
i really take pride in this part more. its a little shorter then part 1 but i think that makes it even better =)
please enjoy! leave a review i worked since june the make this for you newgrounds ^^ the review is da least u can do :)
Now there little boy is a great movie you have put together. But there are flaws i'm afraid of, but even life have flaws ... but about your "little" spelling problem is not that you can attend a spelling bee contest but what the hell. I have seen your kinds before on /trade channel in "wow" i have long studies about your behavior and what your are trying to tell but believe me is turning out as a very misleading way. i.e. cum= the thick white fluid containing spermatozoa that is ejaculated by the male genital tract. Is NOT what i hopefully thought you was thinking about when you was making that sentence, the word you was looking for was "COME" please use that in any further movies/games you may create. and don't use numbers in your sentence like w8/u2/th37f3ar and l33t Please don't use those unless your are making a joke or similar use of them as it will confused some people around this site and makes some of your sentence a bit hard to understand, DON'T take this the hard way, as i only mean this to improved you as your movie is great and all that, but these flaws make it look bad as all eyes are on these mistakes but look deeper into it and i know you will make a stunning movie someday:D
keep your head up and someday the light will shine upon you my boy just be patience
for your one and only mrfox
the preloader was really promising!
1.the art was bad,though some bits were pretty good..don't know what to think(did u actually make the whole thing yourself?).are you drawing with the mouse?even if you do the flash it self would style those lines a bit :S
2.it was pretty boring man,not a lot of people will watch the whole think.
3.the animation was basic but one can see the effort put in it so that deserves some stars!
4.get a tablet pen or something and get going!you have the will,work on your skills!
it was fun
i loved the music and how you made a mixture of super ninjaness and a really good song. i enjoyed it but maybe a lil more work on your english haha. no i wouldnt really change a thing it was simple and fun. i loved it. but i noticed something at the end in the babies hair there was something that looked like a glitch or something idk if thats supposed to be there but it for some reason bothered me and took my focus from what was happening at the time.
A short film about a park bench
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