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This is my first proper flash animation, sorry about the no preloader thingy :(
p.s i did all the animation in flash 8 cuz im poor and the voice in garage band by my self :D
p.s.s Sorry for this, iv just realised how bad it is ...
I can see that you've put a lot of thought into this, and I did laugh my socks of when the lazer... well I won't spoil it!
Your drawings are actually pretty decent, some interesting and varied voice acting, good use of sound effects. I believe you will go far.
Have to say, this makes no sense what so ever. It is just a guy saying hey look a monkey and then the monkey has pixel text run over its face and then green stuff comes out of its face and the loop never ends at all. It just looks quite creepy and I don't really get what you have going on here? Is the monkey trying to be evil and scary or what?
Also the guy just kind of stands there, looks badly drawn, as well as looking bored too. Would suggest you go back, spend more time adding detail to the characters and giving them bit more of a role rather than slapping it all togehter.
Not a bad try for your first decent though. However there is a lot of room for improvement.
thing looks like it's been drawn in paint, and makes no sense. yet, at the same time, i'm laughing at it. maybe it's that stupid laser attack thing, or that it's on a loop, i don't know. touch up the art a bit and make your next thing a bit longer and you'd probably get better scores, the randomness element i like.
Lacking any cohesion or thought
After I realized it looped, I went "Hey look, it's the X button!"
Not only are the drawings sloppy, but the idea behind it isn't well though out. Why does that guy point out the monkey? Why are we watching the monkey? Why does his laser attack not do anything?
There's nothing back it up.
Terrible just terrible
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