Improv Typo(graphy)

I understand "improv" but honestly it wasn't that funny or interesting for that matter. I mean you can tell that your flash was influenced by "Dot, Dot, Dot" which was neat to see, but the aspect that made that flash such a hit was that it was a really funny satire of someone's comment. In your case the animation was good and so was the ways you organized the text, but the improv topic wasn't funny or something that makes you want to keep watching. It would have been better if you just had a more interesting improv topic that would add something to the flash, because this was just boring..

mushu55t

Rated 5 / 5 stars February 10, 2011

Very nice work

Though, it's not as great as some typography animations out there, you did a pretty damn good job with it.

I'm impressed, and if you learn how to make stuff like dotdotdot (the animation.) you will go really far in typography.

tankor

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars February 10, 2011

I liked the art...

The voice recording sounds a little scratchy.
And it's really not all that funny.
But I'm sure with another sound clip you could make something like this fantastic.