Time Traveling Nipples
Credits & Info
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Author camisawesome
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Other Cave Man
- Uploaded
- Feb 7, 2011 | 6:27 AM EST
- File Info
- Movie
- 1.3 mb
Author Comments
This was one of my first animations I have ever made, so be nice. It really helped me get a basic understanding of flash and how it works. These days I practise a lot more so I belive what I produce in the future will be better
Reviews
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 11, 2011
funny
i just seen this live
Rated 5 / 5 stars February 9, 2011
awesome!!! wheres the sequels?
awesome animation guys i wan't to know when then next ones are comming out :3
Rated 4 / 5 stars February 8, 2011
Great first animation!
A very good first animation. Something to be very proud of! However, if I were to give any criticism, it would be that the art style is way too "Edds World" inspired. You should try to come up with your own unique art style, something that really personalizes your work.
The story was somewhat cliche, but the time travelling nipples was a unique twist. The humor was also pretty good. I mean, I wasn't rolling around laughing, but it did make me grin. My advice, I'd work on creating exaggerated and twisted facial expressions to add an additional level of humor.
Another criticism (which doesn't relate to the animation): Don't delete poor reviews. I know they aren't nice to look at, but they are an important source of feedback. The audience of Newgrounds can be very harsh, but will some will offer critical advice which will see you improve.
Keep at it!
Rated 4 / 5 stars February 8, 2011
Very Nice
Animation is quite smooth, but i do agree about the white bars. looks taky. But Yotso is called the butterfly effect, used in all sorts of cartoons like The Simpsons for example. Next time try and not rush the ending. Would of been funny to see them ride dinosaurs or mess around and spend more time in the past or like go to other times too. But overall great first proper animation which is smooth and has a short but sweet silly storyline
Rated 5 / 5 stars February 8, 2011
Pretty cool guy ;)
Plenty of lulz, loved the back to the future ref, always a must with time travel imo, great voices, cant wait for more of your work!
p.s the british guy sounds smexy ;)