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This is a short flash movie called scammed about the group getting scammed and trying to go to a casino and pull off a sneaky plan to try and get some money back.
I know its not the most amazing thing but if you don't like it please tell me why and what i could do to improve
Like you said "it's not the best flash ever" but i can see that you put a lot of effort in it. The intro, all the voice acting and synching it into the flash, etc.
The animation and char desing was pretty decent, and the plot is very creative too.
Only thing i would recomend you to really improve in further submisions is the sound quality, if you can spare some Mb, set it to normal or better. And for further voice acting it would be nice if you could give them a lil more "life" to it, it was a little monotone.
So bottom line, good job, try to keep improving, who knows maybe you'll get a daily feature someday. Good luck =).
thanks for that, I'll take that into mind when making the next ones, audacity was playing up when i was making it with the recordings
audio is horrible, animation is average, story is dumb 2/10
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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