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So I though I'd test my skills at making something like the credits from Fyat, where the text explodes out to emphasize the beat. Did a rusty job, but overall I'd say I did fine.
Enjoy, and give me some tips on typography animation, It'll help a bunch.
Song can be found at http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/397371 (remove spaces)
Yes, this is sorta spam. Sorry. I couldn't help it :D
I knew this would pass, becuase after being blammed (having other subs blammed) about 6 times in the past, I know where the bottom threshold is ^_^
Wrong place to submit..
If you submitted this in the audio portal you would have got better reviews, theres no need for the flashing text.
Needs some flair
You should try a stronger bass beat song, the timming is pretty good, but could be better, the looping is a lil hard you need to cut off the last bit to make it smoother. the text is pretty bad looking too. gl on future projects.
I actually made the loop in 40 minutes, and the movie in 8, you should listen to my other songs if bass is what you're looking for.
Wow, that was awful
You've made a half-decent loop, then added no animation to it, to try and get more of a boost for your audio. The effort would be commendable, if you'd made an animation, as opposed to some looping graphics that consisted of a one colour background that changes from time to time, while the text in front pulses, possibly in time with the music, but I couldn't begin to try and follow that.
Seriously, if you want some acclaim for your animation skills, try setting something up where you have an animation of maybe someone dancing, some sort of interpretation of the music going, rather than just a flashing background. The only thing you seem to have interpreted here is the program's name - Flash. It does do other things, you know.
More effort required all around.
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This movie was made in 8 minutes, so why are you taking it so seriously?
Currently there's nothing wrong with what you have, but I think it's to short to pass on the newgrounds portal.
Well it did, so what's the problem?
Decent, but Bland
It doesn't really strike me as a bad piece for credits, but its not that good either, infact the more I look at it, the worse it gets. 3/10 Rate 0
Well, it's rave... It's not supposed to be pleasant to look at
And how does 3/10 = 0/5?
A short film about a park bench
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