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Part one of two
originally this flash was one whole part but my computer wouldnt export it to a flash -_-'' so i split this into two parts. part two will be updated later tonite.
oh & im srry my english wasnt that good when i started making this but my brother is teeching me very well.
also this flash is pretty long. and just because this is titled "naruto" doesnt mean its "NARUTO".. its "naruto vampy". plz give it a chance and i'm sure you may find sumthin u will like.
neways thx for reading and thx for watching ^_^
o an leav a revew it took me 7 munths 2 make this GOSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is awful.
For one thing, who's surname is Vampy? That is a shortening of vampire, which you should know are not real.
This is definitely the worst flash I have ever seen.
The worst part, besides the animation, is the sound. It sounds like you downloaded a bunch of sound effects and threw them in whenever possible.
inb4 FRIK U FRIK U IM NOT ALEIN IL KEEL U FRIK U FRIK U FRIK U FRIK U FRIK U
NERUTA IS BEST SHAW EVR NAMIGN MY CHERECTS AFTR HIM IS ORIGINEL ANIMER IS SO CULLLLLLL
Ok then, lets get this over with...
Well I did give it a chance, and it was exactly what I expected, a copy off Naruto with pretty lame graphics. But I believe that the point of the reviews is to provide the author with as much information as possible so that they can improve, so that's exactly what i'm going to TRY and do.
I'm gonna have to say it soon or later, your drawing skills aren't up to par. Human anatomy is pretty hard, but after you draw a couple of characters from pictures over and over (that's how I learned) you'll get the basics. The people look extremely out of proportion, and that just won't do.
Naruto. The first word that caught my eye was Naruto. Of course, people aren't gonna be very excited when they find out it's not actually Naruto. I'll get back to this later.
I don't really have the time to watch the other episodes before this, but the plot line of this particular flash was; intriguing. I don't know why, but i couldn't take my eyes off until it was finished. You do have a knack for storytelling, i can say that.
Animation was decent, partly because it was pulled down by most of bad drawings. The city scenes were pretty well designed, even though the mountain from Naruto was a bit expected. The tweens of people walking by and stuff was also well done. The backgrounds were pretty good too, by my standard anyway.
Music addition was excellent. There is literally nothing more I can add to that. Well on topic, I understand your English is bad but you can always use Google Translator or get your friend to read over it.
Ok then, Naruto is at the top of my favorite anime list, so I'm sure a great fan like you can do better. Once you get the hang of drawing characters, you will do much better flashes. But a word of warning; people will compare this to the original Naruto when rating it!!! This is what probably why it gets low scores (i gave you a 4 btw) . I suggest you should experiment with lots of other animations and make up your own story, no matter how dry and boring it might be compared to the original Naruto. Btw, I forgot, I applaud you on the length of the animation, I just don't have the patience to anime that long. Kudos.
I respect you for trying and making a flash where not many would, but it's not that good. If you made the few of your characters that just didn't look... natural- a little more humanoid and realistic frame, along with some voice acting (if you can) orr at least a little better English, this would be great. Btw I know you can't really speak English, so thats ok. Ntm that the (I think this is what it was) rape scene was O.o wierd. That made no sense really and it would have been a good example of a place for voice actors and better animation. Good luck ^_^
bad movie i ever seen dude just look at that bad graphics the worse ones i don't like it
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