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Feb 3, 2011 | 11:09 PM EST

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Within my story I hope soon to build on, young characters (mostly orphans) in a futuristic age gather together in a gang to fight other established gangs, CEO's, and governments from corruption, drugs, and war. The plot starts with a young character named Max, orphaned and adopted, by an asian family who instructs her in the ways of a real ninja, Mr miyagiie style. Soon with the skills learned, she and her instructors two siblings venture out encountering new allies and lost family, creating there own culture "the Delinquents". As much as I hate to comment on this, the truth is, I did a sloppy job posting it as you can see the title is cropped out and I had to take away a photo from the background dipicting a futuristic looking hover bike that later becomes the prop for the brother of one of the main characters who so happened to steal the bike in the story. The theme of the story is that even as a delinquent of socity there is truth in some peoples actions in disregard of their title.

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TheManofSteal13TheManofSteal13

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars February 4, 2011

You're on for a good start.

The animation is looking good there, but its important to not reveal so much until you have an actual opening or teaser to show. When people see this, they're going to want to know where the production as gone, by telling them in your comments should help out. A brief is always good.



JonWB2005JonWB2005

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars February 3, 2011

looks like it has serious potential

but keep in mind, nothing ruins a good flash like bad voice acting. Just something to think about