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I made this two weeks early for Valentine's day in the hopes that I could help people be more prepared.
Also, this is my first flash. P.M. me and give me some pointers, I would appreciate the help.
(All "art", audiio, and voice done by me.)
SINCE IT'S YOUR FIRST
you did a good job. You had music, good voice audio, managed to stay inside the lines and didn't over complicate the plot. It was a nice play on words also.
however it was only about 7 seconds long, i would of liked it if it was longer, like have him attack more than one person and do different scenarios. But other than that you did good.
Well, originally I was going to have the heart shriek "heeyah!" and chuck a tomahawk at the viewer, but that turned out just awful. lol. Thank you for your kind review. :D
lol great flash
that was random but mostly funny. Make more :D
lol yeah thats the kind of randomness i love on NG XD
really good for a first flash
keep making short vids because you are really good at this
oh, Gee, thanks for the kind review :D
I'm working on something with a friend, so I'll be posting soon. ^.^
lulz heart attack
maybe make it longer? left me wanting more, in a good way.
Sweet, thanks! I'll have some more content coming, I just needed to gauge the audience. :3
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