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Proper Raptors

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rated 4.41 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
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dinosaur
raptor
ballet
moviejam1

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Jan 31, 2011 | 4:01 AM EST
  • Frontpaged January 31, 2011
  • Daily Feature February 1, 2011
  • Weekly 5th Place February 2, 2011

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  • NG Movie Jam 1
    NG Movie Jam 1 Teams had 48 hours to animate stories from the forums.

Author Comments

-Team Lollercoaster-

Here is our submission for the January 2011 Movie Jam. Teams had 48 hours to make an animation of a story submitted in the forums. The story was written by our own voice actor, Eddache!

This was a really fun experience and I couldn't of asked for better teammates, every member really excelled at their role. Thanks for all of the reviews and score, and thank you Tom for the front page and 1st place in the jam!

Here is the story submission :
"Two velociraptors are about to watch the ballet. They are very high class, sophisticated and cultured velociraptors. None of the cast survive."

Reviews


tyler2513tyler2513

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Great Music Choices!

~Good~
The art was really neat especially for 48 hours that was rather splendid and the music choice was perfect to put on while we had a good laugh at the ending and it was pretty funny how the raptors british accents made them sound like gentlemen until they ate the balay dancers, some pretty funny stuff. The pace and sense of timing wasn't so bad for 48 hours I suppose but it was a rather funny ending keep up the great work man!

~Improve~
The pace and sense of timing wasn't bad for 48 hours as I previously said but the plot was kind of classic and somewhat predictable and needed some more twistig ideas to keep the viewer hooked into this. The storyline really wasn't much it was just some raptors admiring people until they ate them but for 48 hours great job!

~Overall~
While this is pretty short and predictable I'd guess I'd watch it for a really quick laugh and a short video but artwork is fantastic for 48 hours keep up the nice work man!

-TY Reviews


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sizzfizzsizzfizz

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Amazing

You really did this in 48 hours?


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gamerboy20091gamerboy20091

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Hilarious

Stupendous and 2 great thumbs :D


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BANRYUUBANRYUU

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

It's great, but...

The one problem with this is that velociraptors aren't that big, those are more along the lines of Deinonychus. :D *shot*

In all seriousness, it's funny, terrifically animated given the 48-hour time period, and my personal favorite of the Movie Jam 2011 submissions I've seen. Good work!


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SeymourSeymour

Rated 5 / 5 stars

you did this 48 hours?

damn dude, massive props to you, and the idea itself, it just...true classic comedy, sort of miss that. Anyway, the voices themselves, I loved, they were a bit quiet at parts, but the flow and delivery was solid.
Keep up the amazing work, and hopefully the collab team itself does more projects.


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