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Team Doodle or Die
This is our Jam movie in which a little boy asks his favourite girl to the dance, only He is confronted by his fears of rejection.
Good, but needs some polish.
I really liked the animation as a whole, the "drawn on paper-thoughts" bit in the middle made me laugh quite a bit. But it seemed as though the voices were underplayed and a little bit rushed towards the end of the animation. Always remember that timing, and more specifically, spacing of "funny-hits" can make a big difference in how a scene is interpreted.
Animation: 4/5 (Really nice quality, but towards the end, characters seemed to have fairly blank expressions, despite the wild circumstances around them.)
Acting: 3.5/5 (Was solid acting with a lot of potential, not sure if it was hampered by the fact that this was such a rushed project or just due to your team's acting style, but the end of the animation's voice acting just seemed slightly washed out.)
Story: 5/5( Great story here, loved it all the way through, it just seemed like you needed to take a bit more time to polish up the voice acting )
Overall: 4/5 (Wonderful animation, but like I said before, for whatever reason, the characters seemed to become rather plain and lifeless at the end of the animation, even though there was a fair bit of room for BIG emotional swings and cues.)
Thanks for this wonderful contribution to the Movie Jam, and I hope to see more great things from you in the future. :)
The animation was good and the ending was awesome. I over-think things pretty often so I got a kick outta this. Audio was a bit sub par but I'm not terribly upset about it. Good job!
*chuckle and ughhhhhwha? worthy
when the replay button came up i just said no, lol seriously though good stuff my rating was not effected by the sound quality or any of that other stuff just the set up of the animation and the punchline
anyway it was good and you should do more, just get some new voices and some better recording, do or dont it wont effect my ratings in the future but id would stil help
what i cant hear you!!!! funny concept, you could've made it funnier or talked louder too. and more dramatic music
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