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Jan 29, 2011 | 10:52 AM EST
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    NG Movie Jam 1 Teams had 48 hours to animate stories from the forums.

Author Comments

Scrib: mmm commentary. i dunno, do you have anything to say about this?
Nog: nah.


EDIT: added the great movie jam loader, fixed that fade problem that nobody noticed but me



Rated 0.5 / 5 stars


That was seriously wrong on majorly fucked up levels.

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MrScriblam responds:

oh my god FINALLY a negative review


Rated 0 / 5 stars

What the fuck did I just see?

I expect 5 minuets of my life back from you guys. in the post. with a note saying sorry. and candy.

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MrScriblam responds:

its a minute and twenty seconds

are you trying to say you watched it four times?


Rated 0 / 5 stars

bad animation and story

things to work on:
mouth movements
story that you didn't write so not really your fault
Some parts were reused
just narration over a stupid animation
No backround on the baby
You just din't put much effort in sorry

MrScriblam responds:

farts doodie and a cocky pee
dont make no difference to me


Rated 0 / 5 stars


Genuinely awful, not awful enough to be funny but just awful enough to be completely blamworthy. I know your a good animator because ive seen your other work but there is no excuse for this.

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MrScriblam responds:

im so sorry please forgive me daddy oh god no daddy not the apples daddy


Rated 0 / 5 stars

0.5 Rating

This is an absolutely wonderful rendering of my story I bothered to write for the extremely well organized Movie Jam. I couldn't possibly imagine anything more spectacular then this rendition of pure enlightenment, and solitude.

The artistic flare truly stands out, and the animation is remarkably smooth. I couldn't possibly see a flaw, other then the voice didn't really have much of a "narrator type" voice (if there is a type). Hopefully you can work on that, and maybe add a replay button at the end so I can enjoy such a masterpiece over and over again without having to leave the window.

What I have all just said is nice and all, but to be truthful you have brought warmth to my heart. You have opened my ideas to new possibilities. It is truly outstanding what you guys have managed in the five minutes you took to make my pathetic little story into a reality. You even managed to figure out my hidden message about avoiding earthy foods!

I would say that the creative genius was me, but then again my story just doesn't have the juice to place me at such a high position on the ladder of life. So I think the honor of being "creative genius" belongs to both of you, 'MrScriblam' and 'Nogfish'; I would have never thought you guys would look so beautiful.

I must thank you for bringing my lonely two paragraph story to life for this professionally planned collab/event. Hugs and kisses, and all the best.

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MrScriblam responds:

you're a bad writer just fyi