Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
Scrib: mmm commentary. i dunno, do you have anything to say about this?
based on the true story of WRITER WHO WISHES TO REMAIN ANONYMOUS FOR WHATEVER REASON
EDIT: added the great movie jam loader, fixed that fade problem that nobody noticed but me
That was seriously wrong on majorly fucked up levels.
oh my god FINALLY a negative review
What the fuck did I just see?
I expect 5 minuets of my life back from you guys. in the post. with a note saying sorry. and candy.
its a minute and twenty seconds
are you trying to say you watched it four times?
bad animation and story
things to work on:
story that you didn't write so not really your fault
Some parts were reused
just narration over a stupid animation
No backround on the baby
You just din't put much effort in sorry
farts doodie and a cocky pee
dont make no difference to me
Genuinely awful, not awful enough to be funny but just awful enough to be completely blamworthy. I know your a good animator because ive seen your other work but there is no excuse for this.
im so sorry please forgive me daddy oh god no daddy not the apples daddy
This is an absolutely wonderful rendering of my story I bothered to write for the extremely well organized Movie Jam. I couldn't possibly imagine anything more spectacular then this rendition of pure enlightenment, and solitude.
The artistic flare truly stands out, and the animation is remarkably smooth. I couldn't possibly see a flaw, other then the voice acting...you didn't really have much of a "narrator type" voice (if there is a type). Hopefully you can work on that, and maybe add a replay button at the end so I can enjoy such a masterpiece over and over again without having to leave the window.
What I have all just said is nice and all, but to be truthful you have brought warmth to my heart. You have opened my ideas to new possibilities. It is truly outstanding what you guys have managed in the five minutes you took to make my pathetic little story into a reality. You even managed to figure out my hidden message about avoiding earthy foods!
I would say that the creative genius was me, but then again my story just doesn't have the juice to place me at such a high position on the ladder of life. So I think the honor of being "creative genius" belongs to both of you, 'MrScriblam' and 'Nogfish'; I would have never thought you guys would look so beautiful.
I must thank you for bringing my lonely two paragraph story to life for this professionally planned collab/event. Hugs and kisses, and all the best.
you're a bad writer just fyi
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.