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The first file I uploaded was a dud.
So heres the finished version of my film. An exercise for uni wanted us to have two characters having a dialogue. I choose to redesign two characters from Blankets to use. Her legs are missing I know lol.
Ou rite paddner....
Ok, bunnie here's the critic again, the animation was quite good as I see from the first one you show previuosly to the one you finished, It seems interesting to know how the animation process works here on the grounds, it nevers happened but this funny accident you had allowed me to show the progress of your work. It was really nice work.
NOW!!!! it's time for the critic!!!
first of all, you have a terrible audio track for this animation, the draw and the sequence of voices and characters its really good, the problem it's that the audio can be understanded and it has an echoe that it's not necesary on the animation unless you have another enviroment on it, and you need to look a way to stop the loop, maybe using layers on the animation like Stamper's tutorials would be useful for your future works.
Nice animation. But I can't make out half the dialogue.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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