The Bunneh

Needs polish. Looping is a bad idea. Voice is good. Animation is great for stick-figures. Add some color, some background, make the bunneh look way crazy bad (since the comparison is a stick-reality), and maybe a song at the end with some credits or other nonsense. I gave you a 5. I think you have potential. Save this flash!

pengawill12 responds:

Dang looping... I just dont know how to do the start and replay buttons yet. Thx for the tips!

sandwich-eater

Rated 3 / 5 stars January 27, 2011

Not bad

The voice acting was pretty good. The audio quality could have been better, which you can do in flash by going file > publish settings > flash > then up the audio kbps.
The animation was alright, but the dropping in at the start was kind of *too* unrealistic. You could have made gravity present by using a tween with -100 easing, or have him walk in.
As a whole, it seemed a bit lacking. Things like a background, full characters and colour. It was also a little short and could do with more of a punchline.
But you did a reasonably good job for your first flash, so keep at it and strive to improve.