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Little Short I Made For School
Animation fine, the rest.
Nothing wrong whit the animation, but to add sound and music does make so much differens! Maybe a bit more dramatic, which would have easily done with good sound effect/music and maybe faster/greater movement in some part. :)
I really like your art style!
The message is great
this flash should have had some sounds.
A cute flash
Short and to the point. I understand this was made for school, but some tips to improve it would be adding sound, and for newgrounds I suggest adding a preloader to it.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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