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This is my first flash project ever, and my first flash submission here on New Grounds!
I'd really appreciate som constructive criticism!
It took me a few weeks to make. I learned everything from scratch.
Thank you, and enjoy the game! I hope you like it, (:
John is a ball, and he needs your help to avoid the bullies. Reach to level 90 and you will change Johns life, forever!
Interesting Idea. But kinda boring.
This game is interesting up until a point.
Consider having different sized balls, and have the bullies come from different directions. Also, the music is a real bummer, find songs that fit the mood better.
All in all, not very fun, but could be improved!
I'll see what I can do! Thanks, (:
For your first game I think this is pretty good. I just think that you should make a more detailed background, and maybe nerf the blue balls. They seem too good. 5 seconds instead of 10?
I'll try to figure out a good background, and I'll nerf the blue balls in the next version! (:
siple and fun
this game is all a flash game needs to be a simple game thats a lot of fun and tha has anoriginal premiss.
I think you did pretty alright for your first project. I like the little interactive "skip" button with John hiding behind it. That was nice. It's the little things I notice that let me know you tried hard. Also, it's a good story. Err, now, I could be mistaken, but is that the song from FFX? I swear to God I almost shed a tear in the intro. lol.
The song is a Final Fantasy remix that I found in the audio portal, but when I tried to credit the author, the song was gone, /:
Thank you! : D
That tear was my goal, once again, thank you! : D
a good starter
it is a good starter for flash but putting more stuff would be nice
Thank you, (:
I've been thinking about more things to put in for days now, /:
If you have any ideas, I'd love to listen. You can send me a PM if you want to, (:
A short film about a park bench
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