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o i got the idea XD it was funny wen he was talking
Bad, really bad
Okay, you should draw the sprites with your mouse instead of smearing jizz on the screen and taking a print-screen of it. Next, you should take the blind-fold off of your head BEFORE you start animating. It will look better, trust me. Gradients don't look good in Madness, so stop using them and draw your own shading you lazy bastard. I hope you take these things into consideration and your Madness animation will look a lot better.
what did I just watch?
First off, the lack of music kills this. The art style is unoriginal. There was no attempt to even make this coherent. Overall, this project just shows a lack of effort. No attempt to lip sync, and that scene right before the end goes on for way too long with no change in visuals. If you're gonna show the world your work, at least put some effort into it first.
I'd critique more of it, but I honestly can't even understand it enough to do so. Come back when you make a serious submission.
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