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Jan 22, 2011 | 12:34 PM EST
  • Daily 5th Place January 23, 2011

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Suicide or murder? The city's finest are on the case.

Hey everyone! This is my first real submission to NewGrounds and I hope you enjoy it. This started off as a short lip syncing test and turned into the short scene you see here. I've been animating on and off for a couple years, making only small little tests and whatnot. So I decided that this year I would get back into it and actually release some of my work. So this is honestly, my first real, fully completed animation (considering I used to never finish what I started). I'll have more out in the future!

Enough rambling then, please watch and enjoy!

Watch on YouTube: http://youtu.be/B21YPXq107o

Reviews


ZarioxZariox

Rated 4 / 5 stars

>_<"

Oh t'was funny tough, know what? Subtitles man, subtiteles ¬¬....


BrandonCanDraw responds:

I thought about it at one point. Didn't think it was completely necessary. I can add them later though if I want.


eye-twistereye-twister

Rated 3 / 5 stars

animation: solid. writing: not really...

Your animation skills are pretty good. The quality's pretty clear and crisp, and it's not choppy. But I think the writing for this flash is pretty weak, and that's fine if that's not what you're focusing on - but this wasn't very funny. It's not an original joke, and it wasn't all that effective. If you worked on the dialogue more, I'm sure this would have been a better flash.



jcg04041989jcg04041989

Rated 5 / 5 stars

lawl

Nice, pretty accurate to, cops suck at their job the older they get. Funny stuff man I liked the style nice short keep it up.


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BrandonCanDraw responds:

Finally, someone who gets it!


EnimoreseEnimorese

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Could be better

I think it could work as a spoof of crime drama cliche's, but the voice acting isn't all that good. I like that the actors were at least subtle in there performances whereas the actors of most so-called "parodies" think that to be funny you have to be as loud and/or stupid as possible, but these guys were just a bit too subtle, and by that I mean it sounds like they really don't give a shit about what they're doing. :/
Also, the joke at the end was very much like a bad sitcom--too fucking predictable.



JurgenJurgen

Rated 2 / 5 stars

hmm

it was okay. Not too bad but i mean the main thing that made it so boring for me was the voice acting. Sorry but it was really poorly done, i mean i know that they are both suppose to be very "bored" characters but thats not a good choice. There was no emotion involved, making me as bored as the characters on screen.

It seemed like whoever was voicing it didnt even care about the job he was doing.

Plus there wasnt too much animation or atleast not much COMPLEX animation.

Decent but not nothing special


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