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This is my first submission to Newgrounds, though I've been using flash for quite some time (And am only now getting the hang of it)
This flash was based off of an extensive and immature comic written by yours truly, that depending on availability of voice acting, I may turn into a series.
if it lags on the sound, turn it into medium quality at the preloading screen. Unless offsync is your thing, no judgement.
:3 Pure Awesomeness!!! <3
This was such an amazing flash!! I loved it when the banana was doing the epic thrust and I love how the way the food was getting into war with each other. Btw the song for it was perfect. :D. I wonder if my food in my fridge fights like that at night??? xD LOL. Keep up the good work mate. ^_^
Awesome first flash!
Im giving ten of ten because you did great for your first flash. Wonderful. Keep working and u get better and better. Good luck with the series.
Nice First Effort
The audio was off in a few spots, and the storyline needs a bit of development. It definitely could have been funnier in spots. And there were a few places where it was highly predictable. But your style is unique and the visuals were just amusing to look at. I can guarantee with a bit more work and getting some voice actors to assist that you can come up with a really good flash.
I would normally have given a six, but I am giving an extra point because you made sure your first flash submission was actually worthy of submission. So many people submit horrible flashes that are nothing more than practice runs they should show to their friends; stuff that has no purpose being on the portal. So I feel you deserve some credit for actually practicing and honing your skills before you submitted your first entry.
All in all, a good job, and you show potential. I'm looking forward to seeing your future work here.
A very fair and definitely helpful. I think I've fixed the audio problem, and the preloader is up there, thank you so much for a generous score and constructive review.
I really liked this idea! Brilliant! I think I just about pissed myself when the food were dancing (after the sliding intros to some of the major characters). Especially to the strawberry! Hehe.
The only throwbacks for me were: Lack of a graphical pre-loader, and the continual loop. A lot of good flash today, comes standard with a start and replay button. That's the only reason you didn't get a 10/10 star rating from me.
I hope you make more of this series though. It looks like it could have great potential!
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