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Jan 20, 2011 | 1:57 PM EST

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Fathers Against the Use of Drugs Presents:
The Potential Negative Effects of Drug Use:
The Negative Effects of Cigarettes.
Some images may offend or confuse viewers.

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SchaafbrosSchaafbros

Rated 4 / 5 stars January 21, 2011

Nice job man!

I think you did a pretty good job on this flash! I think that the animation was nicely done and that the first two characters were alright. Now for a bit of criticism, the retarded clerk character wasn't an enjoyable character...in fact he was a bit annoying and I felt that character could've been done better.

Overall though I think you did a really nice job! My only complaint is that for a flash that's going for the humor factor, you missed the mark by just a little bit.
I think you have the potential to get on the front page, you just need to develop likeable characters, and add humor that everyone can relate to.



LotsOfEvilLotsOfEvil

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars January 21, 2011

Good

Only thing that really bothered me was the crumpled paper effect on the whole thing. Pretty decent other than that. Glad to see an original style.



Murder-ProductionsMurder-Productions

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 20, 2011

nice

you have to make the sequal. the positive effects of drugs and cigarettes lmao


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Astrum21Astrum21

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars January 20, 2011

Eh.

Voices were annoying, and you could have mentioned the other effects of smoking. Cancer, Emphysema, COPD, Throat cancer, etc.... You could have done better.

I did just quit four months ago though. Bad and expensive habit.



joel-ftwjoel-ftw

Rated 2 / 5 stars January 20, 2011

what?

that is really weak, i appreciate the message and everything but poorly created. also the audio when he coughs is way too loud, it distorts and crackles. its no big deal just would make it seem more proffesional if you lowered the db in the daw or whatever you used.


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