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JUST SAMPLE TO GET FEEDBACK IF I SHOULD CONTNIUE DOING MORE SHORTS LIKE THIS
this flash is
i respect you being honest but i like looking for pointers so i can get better this is only my second attempt.
Work on the audio and the timing. Good animation! Also, make sure the next one doesn't go on a continuous loop.
thanks its not completely finish i just didnt wanted to get some feedback and advice before i spend all week on finish it.
Your point should be a little more clear
its okay, not the funniest thing ive ever seen. the audio quality is a little low, and you should work on your jokes a little. but aside from that, the animation quality is fairly good. keep going.
thanks do you have any advice on how to record better quality audio with out being in a studio.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
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