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Mannerless Automatons!

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rated 3.10 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
Tags:
robots
moustache
classy
posh

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Uploaded
Jan 19, 2011 | 8:11 PM EST

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Author Comments

I'm an amateur, I know, and the sound quality isn't brilliant. Please forgive me for this. Moving swiftly on.

A short lesson in Robot etiquette. Enjoy!

Reviews


BlackenedDoveBlackenedDove

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Quite posh indeed my good sir. Nice and classy and very original, a bit short but still very enjoyable.



Immortal-CheeseImmortal-Cheese

Rated 4 / 5 stars

random ending

didn't see that one coming, but pretty funny lol good job


DrJesus responds:

When I first wrote it it actually went on for a lot longer with a ridiculously large amount of dialogue planned, but no exact punchy ending. So I shortened it and settled for random : D


NverseMpossiblpRadoxNverseMpossiblpRadox

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

original

Like the guy below me said. Very true. I haven't seen anything like it. It's a shame you didn't submit it for robot day. It might have been funny if the one with the watch had specified the time to the microsecond, and the other had been appalled by his estimate of the time, being, say, 37 microseconds off.

Boy, if those robots think that is rude, they'd better never meet me.


DrJesus responds:

Decent alternate plot device there. *files away for future use* Thank you : )

As for Robot day, I wasn't on NG by then and hadn't had the idea XD It would have been lost amidst the swathes of better animations though, so not all bad eh?


TurkeybeanTurkeybean

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great work...

It is always nice to see something original in the portal. Although short, I found this really entertaining. From start to finish it ran extremely smooth, not what you usually see from a first animation. It seems as though you have put a good deal of thought into to this piece. I am curious to see what you will be able to progress with in the future. Good luck!


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DrJesus responds:

Thank you kindly. I've in mind to do more Mannerless Automaton shorts if they prove successful.


LepyLepy

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Rather Stunning!

I liked it. The audio quality doesn't really matter THAT much, I just recommend turning it up (or if you don't know how, Google it).
I also HIGHLY recommend NOT putting "This is my first flash", because that will usually end up in a LOT of people voting 0 on this without even watching it.


DrJesus responds:

Cheers for the info. So far so good though : D