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new series of a parody that wii(^~^) are working on
it ok at beast it need more stuff
Lot of room for improvement, yet funny :)
I believe that this series can be ultimately successful if you simply neaten things up, like the following:
Title screen: this is too pixelated, and needs to happen a little bit quicker.
The mouths: might wanna change them...
Grammar: I think you should go for the neat style, as I (And I'm sure many other people), like things that are proper, like WE instead of WII, and stuff like that.
Other than this, I think this can be successful, and my criticism is my personal belief, and you don't need to take it seriously :)
Nice pilot episode.
Maybe.... but not quite.
I like the idea, but the quality and length of the video is really low. As it is right now, it's not very entertaining. I'll pass it but it needs work.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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