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Jan 13, 2011 | 5:41 PM EST

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Author Comments

this is my first flash uploaded, and i really like it. it obviously sucks but im hoping to get better, please just dont rate it down too much cuz i dont want this to get removed :(

IM REALLY SORRY ABOUT THE LAGGING, FOR SOME REASON IT LAGGED AT THE END. but when i was making it, it was perfect!



Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Its your first

watch more cartoons and try harder

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Rated 1 / 5 stars

To tell you the truth

I didn't like this animation at all, but it is your first and you did try. If you wanna make your frame by frame animations look better, use the "onion skin" when you open a new (or old) flash document.

Also, the reason your flash lags is becuase you didn't put a preloader on it. You can download NG preloaders from here: reloaders/


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars


This was pretty weak...I had no idea what was going on...but I guess one guy shit on the other?

A flash doesn't need to look good to survive on newgrounds, but this one simply enraged me...there wasn't any real humor value to it.

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