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I'm not totally sure what my original intent was originally when I created this but I wanted to show this off since I am banned from the forums at the moment any way I could. This may or may not have any audio.
Freaky... I Like It...
It was one of my first ideals that I wanted to project when I was younger while I had taken away inspiration from many a thing I wanted to do some of those things rather differently from the norm. I just never had a way to show until now
Now this is one of those submissions where I can not decide to give it zero stars or ten stars. As I have stated before, when facing a decision like that, just go in the middle. It started out seeming way too simple to be any good, but it actually got better as it went on! I think you really have potential to do something good, you just need improvement. First, you should try not to make it an infinite loop although I could not help you with that. You could also try putting more color in.
Your artwork actually reminded me of David Firth. You should probably also work on your sketches, because they look a tad rough. The biggest thing you can do is probably make it longer and put in some more detail. You are off to a fine start at least. The music could have probably fitted the stuff going on a bit better, too.
Thanks for the reasonable feedback, I'm pleased that you've taken the time to write some constructive criticism a lot of the reviewers don't do that a lot normally a few them just leave a few one liner sentences telling you how much it rocks or sucks and call it a day. I wouldn't say that I take major influence from David Firth but I'd be lying if I said I didn't like some of his creations...
It may be a little difficult for me to take upon those improvements but I don't plan to stick around with the same level of work you see at the moment.
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