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Jan 13, 2011 | 3:14 PM EST

Author Comments

Well...
This is some kind of pilot for my serie.
Angry Scott (that blue bitch) is my Character.
Hope you like this short ninja movie!
Tell me in reviews what I could do better so I can work on it :3

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Bye..?

Reviews


WillJMWillJM

Rated 3 / 5 stars January 13, 2011

Chucklicious

Heh heh, it made me chuckle so it gets a thumbs up from me. It's great to see that you don't need the flashiest graphic or the most groundbreaking sound effects to still be a decent work of Flash. Keep up the good work.


ZoVies responds:

thank you! :D


CrackvCrackv

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars January 13, 2011

Great Start

I thought that was sufficiently hilarious. Keep up the work. Dunno what all these haters be hatin on. That was more than decent work.


ZoVies responds:

haha no I asked them to write in the reviews what I could do better :3
DrPopz sayd some things that could help me pretty good with the sounds :D

thanks and hope you will like my upcoming work too...!


UltraEd12UltraEd12

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars January 13, 2011

Pretty Good

The animation was pretty fluent and I like the sounds. Only problem, it is too short. This idea really could have been extended. I will definitely will be looking out for more of your stuff!


ZoVies responds:

There will be more soon... :3


DrpOpZDrpOpZ

Rated 3 / 5 stars January 13, 2011

Not bad

-GRAPHICS: 7/10-
Drawings: 6/10
Animation: 7/10

-AUDIO: 5/10-
Voice Acting: 4/10
FX: 5/10
Music: 6/10
Sync: 6/10

-CONCEPT: 5/10-
Content: 5/10
Story: 4/10
Originality: 6/10
Execution: 6/10

-OVERALL: 6/10-

-COMMENT-
The overall job works but is nothing too bright or exciting.
I liked the exaggerated mimics of the character, while other animations are quite simple... you should have put much more effort in them.
About audio voice acting could have been much more interesting: actual sounds like when you recorded you didn't want to scare your neighbours with strange noises (exactly what you should have done to get an excellent result :D), and also audio quality is low. To fix that work with internal flash audio editing (panning and volume adjust: fadings can do miracles if you get used with them) and set an higher output quality in publish settings.
Last but not least, work more on humor: nothing wrong with randomness, just take out more of it.
In my opinion all you need to do is polish here and there.
Ah also main character facial expressions reminded me a little bit of LazyBoy.

Keep it up!
3/5


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ZoVies responds:

thanks :)

It was hard for me to do that high ninja voice xD The first few times I did it way too loud with my window open :3
thanks for the sound tips! I was searching for the problem for a long time... :| now I finally know what to do.
I am going to buy a microphone so you do not hear the zoom of the computer and work on expressions :)

This is my drawingstyle... Didn't wanted to copy LazyMuffin... :| ( I guess you ment him with LazyBoy)

thanks a lot for the good advice!


ThatHoboGuyThatHoboGuy

Rated 2 / 5 stars January 13, 2011

Ok...

Its okay,just seems too soft and short.