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Hey, I made this in about 3-4 hours so enjoy. And I'm only 11 so please give me feedback on things to improve on in the animation.
The music is by Parry Gripp: http://www.parrygripp.com /
Better than I could do. Considering the song, you kind of dug your own hole,sunk your own ship, whatever. That's not what I care about. What I DO care about is how you managed to salvage it and not just use photocopies like a lazy dude. You varied the slides (to some degree). So, three stars. :)
there's a way better version, just check my page
you really let me down you have to color your animations well and you need to show more effective ways of showing us your story like when your character looks at the window to see the flat screen you could of shown the people inside.What im about you type right now is very important: instead of doing an animation that took you 3-4hours do a kick ass one that took you 3-4 days to make + you need to do the story bords for your animation(story bord:helps you to plan the scens of the animation).Oh try to do frame by frame animation hand drawn if possible and remember the 12 principles of animation there very very very important every good animation use them so learn the 12 principles of animation and dont forget them ok
could be better
Most of it's repetitive animation. Try to make more frame by frame and make it longer.
even if it was better, you'd still give it the same criticism, so it's all the same to me.
It is okay.
Mostly repeated animation, I would expect that from a frame-by-frame animations, but this is good for somebody of your caliber.
11 year old animator
You Really need to put effort on to your animations cuz like when the guy said "i saw People Watching a flat screen TV"
show people watching a flat screen TV.
you can't make an animation in 3-4 hours mostly if you make a music video it could take you up to like 4-6 days!
like krinkels he takes his time to make animations that are awesome and everybody LOVES his animations so you need to put some more effort in to it so here's my advice and i hope you use it! :)
ok thanks :)
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