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A demonstration on how to fail as a swordsman.
I Like the Concept
The concept is perfectly fine, but the delivery needs work.
1) There should be an option to play the entire thing instead of having to click after each scene.
2) There's white space on the edge of the frame. I'd suggest making the background stretch to all edges of the frame.
3) Sound or music would improve this quite a bit. It doesn't have to be amazing sorround sound SFX or pulse pounding thematic music or anything, but something would be nice.
4) Not everyone has super-awesome art skills, but I think the art could have been touched up a little better.
Good luck with your future movies.
i think its a good practice for ya, but i dont give it very high bacause its pretty edgey
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