Thought too soon
I thought the dad was going to say "I felt bad that I adopted you from a whore."
Author Comments
Remember kids! Neglect builds character.
A short short of a comic I doodled in math class.
Kris voiced the dad
I voiced the kid.
I animated the whole thing. Kris watched
Enjoy!
great work budd!
haha i love it! i wiash i can animiat lik you!
MichaelFay responds:
All you need is practice, man!
Just keep at it!
Watching other people's animations and studying them can help to.
Maybe read a couple books on it!
OHOHOHOHOH
very good!
MichaelFay responds:
Thank ya!
Appreciate the 10!
lol
close to perfect but i feel you could have either left out the line about throwing the guy off the bridge or had something that made more of an impact like " So then I stabbed that bitch in the face... I love you son, glad we could have this chat." I mean Idk I just think either of those options would have made the bigger WTF moment that I thnk you were going for, but non the less it was funny.
MichaelFay responds:
Well thank you!
I didn't want to be too dramatic.
My original idea was pretty graphic and I wanted to make it a little more friendly.
Pretty nice.
I love your style. The jokes were original and crisp. The animation was alright too. Good job! Looking forward to more videos from you.
MichaelFay responds:
Thank you man that means a lot!
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