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Dot Dot Dot - Animated

rated 4.46 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original

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Jan 6, 2011 | 11:12 AM EST
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***PLEASE DO NOT rip this and upload to Youtube. I've uploaded it myself under the account "ricepiratenewground s". Thanks.

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I wanted to try my hand at a typography animation, so I figured I'd give it a whirl with one of my favorite voice acting tracks in the audio portal: Dmac's "Dot Dot Dot", based on a review of Super PSTW Action RPG, created by Rhete.

* Thanks a million, Tom, for the FP! :D
** The background track is from Carl Orff's 'O Fortuna' (1935)

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Here's the ACTUAL review by axman13, beautiful misspellings and all (which was deleted, sadly):


i reley dont wan to say this, but i have to now.
this game is so esey. i mean, all you do is hit the spacebar. thats it! how is this an RPG anyway? you cant contrail anything but what it says on the screen! what if i didnt want to buy the potion? what apout quests? all you can upgrade is stranth? there is no way you can lose to the boss at the end! this game is crap! its not even an RPG at all! i mean look at it! in what way is this supposed to be an RPG if you can do quests and stuff? all you do is press one butten the entier time! explain to me! the athore coments al totol lies! is it supposed to be stick dudes? i dont even know how this damn game got the daily 3rd prize, or a rating of 4.26!
pepole think this review is worthles.
go ahead! say it! i dont care! im just trying to make a point here!
blam this piece of crap!!!!

P.S the only reson im giving this a 1 is beacuase the voices where pretty good. but thats it!"



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


The humor really got to me, especially since I see tons of comments that resemble axman13's that make me chuckle. Honestly, I have to say the part where you inserted the definition of contrail was the best. It was so random, interrupting the dramatic speech with the nice cheerful trivia-like music, it was just so hilarious. Mocking the person's grammar, spelling, and use of words at the same time? Excellence.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

I luv dis flashh

It am good!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Well done

I really found this pretty interesting and funny. It really is a wonder the things the NG reviewers write in their reviews and this one really stands out. It was almost as bad as the "Fix yout flash. Need do fix your portal" review of 2005. Having played Super PSTW Action RPG, it's really kind of sad the reviewer really didn't get the humor behind it and felt the need to bastardize the English language.

As for this flash, the voice acting really sells this movie. There is so much anger and energy that it really breaths life into an otherwise garbage review. The typography was well paced and really holds your attention. Also, having "O Fortuna" playing in the background was nice touch. Overall, is it's a humorous take on something the NG authors know all too well, idiotic reviews. Hopefully after viewing this, people will at least try and write something useful for a change. Keep up the good work!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

lol "beacuase"

The whole flash is great, but that one word made my fucking day.

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

That was so fucking awesome.

At first I was thinking "Okay man calm down, you don't need an epic intro, it's just a flash."

I was so wrong. Normally I can't stand it when somebody finds some random flash that isn't that good and calls it epic; it takes meaning away from the word. However, this truly is an epic flash cartoon. Even though the entire thing is typography, I found myself clinging to every bit of animation.

This strongly reminds me of the Dramatic Breakup Letter Reading. Are you that same guy or what?

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