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Lol. That was ... bad.
Everyone has an Opinion
I could go on about how you prolly have never watched the series and don't understand the dept behind everything that the anime stands for, but that would just frustrate you.
I will say though that this submission is crap. Using a standard screen shot that and static with a computer voice that doesn't even pronouce English correctly has to be one of the weakest ways to make a flash. Fail sir.
Yeah well your opinion sucks fantard.
Also anime has no dept you fucking weeaboo.
Almost funny, you sir may have a smiley face :)
A slight improvement over your early submissions
I consider this to be a more decent submission, because it appears that you have put more effort into this than anything else.
For example, I'm glad that you decided to use more dialogue for longer length. I also like how you used animated noise for visual interest. However, you could have used more imagery than just a cute fanart illustration of L for emphasis.
To summarize, I can see a bit of improvement here, but you still have a long way to go. Keep working on it, and you should do fine.
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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