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I think Its kinda good. But you may think differently. PLEASE do NOT BLAM just because its pivot. I know there isn't any audio but just leave comments to tell me how to improve on this. Thx - Aidityx
it WAS great but what you should improve on, is smooth movement! you need to use more frames, and have many frames of like the same thing for eskample: for a kick, instead of hawing like 4-6 frames of a kick, make it 7-10!!! improve each movement with smoother effects, and also add some blood, sweat drops, even very tiny lines that fly out when the target is hit, like a little blood or sweat flying of! if you follow some of this, and hopefully others helpful comments, you will get FAR in the world of animating!
It was good
I have to agree with Acelpheonix that it was choppy, though if you smoothed it out a bit more it would be rarther good
It's good, for an ametuer, I would add a background, more weapons, and better animation, also the green guy owned too much, that makes everyone know that the green guy is going to win, if your going to play it that way, I'd add a twist at the end, like another guy shows up and lends the blue guy a hand, or something. Hope you learned something
Thank you for that review, ill try to make a better one in the future.
it was ok, but it was a bit choppy. a little more fluidity, and then it will be alright! oh yeah, and it shouldda been longer.
good job tho!
I see. The stupid gif. to swf. converter screwed it up near the end. But I'll admit my animations are a little choppy. Though you gotta understand, im no master. Oh it also cut out about 10 more seconds of animation.
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