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This my very first flash animation took 4 days and it was sooo hard,so i hope you enjoy and stop deleting my flash please!
Hmm it's a shame...
You spent all that time making it and the stage is too small. I'd suggest either make it bigger so all this stuff can fit or get a Vcam and fit it.
True,very true,but can i ask if can have freddo's sheet please?
Whats going on? I'm lost.
I can't follow the story because the dialogue stays on the screen for only a second. Music and sound effects would make it better.
Not Terrible for a First Go
Just saying, but we could use some voice actors... Also. am I the only one having problems viewing the entire screen? I appeear to be zoomed in so I miss a lot of the dialogue that might add to the story
There are several things I must point out:
-it appears that there is part of the screen missing both left, right and above (the text doesn't fully show for most conversations
-you should make the animation faster
-put in more music and sounds
I want to be able to see the text and read what it says. Also, that is some pitiful animation of the character's weapons, it just stays on the screen and then explodes.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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