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A teaser for something I'm working on for my motion graphics class. An assassin gets the orders and acts.
The animation is sloppy and the sound is buggy. I would suggest watching Tossu or Knox for inspiration and work on your overall technique. I cant tell if there's any actual plot or not but think about that too.
message me when you finish it please
:D i want to see where this goes!
It was actually alright. I like this trailer. You should work on some more details though. The movie was a little short for my liking. A little longer and you would of gotten yourself an 8.
teasers don't belong in the portal
As the summary describes, teasers aren't meant for the portal. If you really wanted to post a teaser of something you are working on, The alpha section of newgrounds is the place to submit it to. While this actually may have the potency to be good, it needs some work and debugging. The animation when I viewed it seemed slightly choppy. I also noticed in the near end that when the assassin's target was killed, I could see the pupil showing past the left eye lid. Its not totally bad at all, the flash, you just need maybe to practice more on animation, and know what belongs in the portal and what not. Whenever you feel the slightest hint of boredom, practice in flash, that's what I do.
Work on this animation and small side projects, don't let ambition get the best of you. Most of all, never ever rush. Keep practising, someday, you can appease the guys on newgrounds with brilliantly created works of art, and give the crap submitted here even more of a bad name. Good luck in your endevors. And I hope to see this teaser become an actual animation.
A short film about a park bench
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