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this is a short story about a boy and a dog
Nice work here, I think with some better tools at your disposal you can produce some good stuff!
Just so I got this straight, the boy gave the dog a candy bar so it thanks him by pissing on his leg? lol
yes i do need some better tools because I am using a mouse for one thing to draw with and I need to be more careful because I think the colors look nice on my screen but they may not on a screen with a different resolution or what ever.
just needs to retool
For your begining download it shows you have promise... Try for a lil more coherent structure and definment...
Don't take the boo bird's critique to heart
I thought I had a logical structure to this movie but I well carefully check it again and when you suggested that I use more definement I am thinking you mean more definment in my art work. Well I need something to draw with besides this mouse I am using.
"Mom i've just watched a movie and feel like I was looking at dirty wall"
Weak quality & story line. U should spend some more time on this.
that is an odd way to offer advice
thanks I well work on that
Pretty Good :D
A short film about a park bench
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