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A funny christmas animation.
that was hilarious
Needs a bit of work
Well, I think it was barely any of the descriptions that you gave it, the closest of which being an "a".
The part where the Teddy Bears seem to explode out of the box just seemed to drag on a little more and in parts of the piece where there was something to read, little consideration is given for those that can't read very fast, even those that can are hard pushed to reach descriptions.
The animation in the early going was too fast, jumping from scene to scene, before settling on something that never really shows the plot being exposed to the wider world. With the way that this lacks that, I'd suggest getting basic skeleton of a plot in place, before you progress further. Then, working on the drawing and animation skills will help in other areas. Zoom in a little, use a slightly smaller tool and don't make it obvious that your drawings are created byt the addition of various shapes together. The devil is in the detail.
On top of that, when you advance enough, you'll have a set of animations that are suited to your forte - adding sound. You've got this skill licked at the moment, so consider adding more and more sounds, perhaps even something like voices as well, should they be required.
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Lol, a pretty good short, I liked how the present shot out a bombing of teddy bears! I give it 3/5, and 7/10.
hehe funny :D
beware of teddies :O
i think if u made the box shake up and down it would make it improved the scene of the bears popping out :P
I thought of that, but it wouldn't really work in the animation I was going for
A short film about a park bench
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