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Dec 24, 2010 | 9:04 PM EST

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Thank you for watching my first flash. This straight up took me a total of thirty minutes to make.

I need help with:
-Removing Background Noise in Audacity
-Uploading this to YouTube!!!!!!!!!!!!

Credits:
-Me
-NewGrounds
-Distrocktiv7
-Flash Pro
-Audacity
-You

IF YOU SEE ANY PROBLEMS WITH IT BESIDES BACKGROUND NOISE PLEASE TELL! :D

Reviews


davithetankmandavithetankman

Rated 3 / 5 stars December 25, 2010

better than me

se since this was youre first flash i'm giving you a 3\5 and a 6\10 for a smooth clear animation but needed work on the voiceing.



XenonMonkeyXenonMonkey

Rated 5 / 5 stars December 25, 2010

Truly Amazing

The impeccable voice acting complemented by the smooth, clear animation makes up one of the greatest flashes I've seen this year!



Wyldbob117Wyldbob117

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars December 24, 2010

uhhh

keep tryin... use the onion tool in flash for more seamless frame changing and shift to move objects on horizontal and vertical axis. also do better voice acting and stick to what you wright down man. also do research on things like proper names of things like the flying goomba and the *ahem "Cloud Koopa" amongst other things. keep your environment in the same era as Mario, for instance don't use an 8-bit BG for Paper Mario. there are also many great sites where you can find sound effects and such for things like the car, Mario walking, enemy sounds, and more. if you can't manage to do all of this then do us all a favor and stop trying... or at least wait till your older/have more xp in these matters.


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penguinpow12 responds:

Thank you! I'll try to make my next one much better


Ddude10Ddude10

Rated 4 / 5 stars December 24, 2010

Teehee

LOL i dont rly understand it but I like the randomness



Mario8thMario8th

Rated 1 / 5 stars December 24, 2010

That was pretty bad...

but remove background sound from audacity, record it in a quiet room, and I mean really quiet.
To upload it on youtube film it with hypercam. to get it just search it on youtube.
Also, how old are you? because all the voices were the same, and the animation was pretty bad...


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penguinpow12 responds:

Sorry, it's my first animation ever.