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Dec 23, 2010 | 2:09 PM EST

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HW for my motion graphics class. You know those times everything just happens to go wrong?
I do.

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CoopCoop

Rated 3 / 5 stars December 23, 2010

Good work

A good few examples of what you've learned in class, combined with decent artwork and a fine finish. You can clearly write a good plot and make use of the tools at your disposal to come up with something that looks polished and presentable.

I would like to see more effort on the cheated part over the few days and nights, as the protagonist here didn't really do much, except for wave his arms around for three days. Have him move around and do something, even if he opens the curtains every morning, or goes to get coffee. Just something that you can do in time lapse that will make it seem like he's not just waving hands overhead like a demented lunatic.

The experience of the joke is one that we've all had to bear, but I'd have at least thrown the computer out of the window to end it all - granted, as this was created for a class, you might have had time constraints and so forth, but you have proven that this is the tip of the iceberg.

I look forward to more of your work.

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Linksys17 responds:

Thank you I really appreciate the advice, and yes the time constraints did sort of reduce what it could have been.


PurifactedPurifacted

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars December 23, 2010

First Review!

Not much of a flash..


Linksys17 responds:

I really just put this up to have it if I needed to show it to any of my professors for school if I didn't have the file on me this wasn't even done with flash mostly illustrator sequencing and after effects. Sorry to disappoint.