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Hey guys, long time no see.
Here's some flash I made. I hope you like it. :)
thx for front page btw.
I wish I could give you two scores for this.
The first half was great. Well animated, and with just a touch of subtle humour in there. Often your characters are either static or move in a somewhat robotic manner. During the campfire scene the movement looked fairly normal. And was that an attempt at going frame-by-frame at the beginning there? Either way, it's easy to see that you're improving.
And then the second half.
I don't know what happened, but everything went downhill. The great animation disappeared, the humour disappeared, and the ending just wasn't good. There's nothing wrong with abrupt endings if they're funny (see: Gasoline Man), but this one wasn't funny.
In the end, the great beginning doesn't make up for the mediocre ending I'm afraid. I'd give the first half a 4/5 and the second half a 2/5, for an overall 3/5.
Gasoline man wasn't animated as well, but overall it's a much better movie because of the humour and the fact that it feels like a complete movie. Good luck on your next one.
Yah, I know what you mean. :(
I wanted to finnish this as soon as possible. I was running out of time, so most likely I rushed that last part, and the result was still watchable, but not the best I could do in my opinion.
This year however, I'm setting no deadlines, so I won't run into the same problem again.
Thanx for reviewing!
EDIT: Oh yah, frame by frame. >_< Yes that was frame by frame.
Now try to guess what I spent my whole summer learning how to do. ;)
I got it!
I was reading review like o god i better pay attention but it wasent even hard to follow along... :P
Wow... Thanx. XD I'm so glad you got it! :)
i tried to understand but.. well 10/10 for the effort.! yay.! :D
thanx! yay! :D
I couldn't understand the majority of this.
yep, most people can't
The animation is fine, but I could not for the life of me figure out what the hell was going on.
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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