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Dec 21, 2010 | 7:03 PM EST

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Just a short animation. Just a start.

Better audio, go to (coming soon)

Reviews


lizzytalllizzytall

Rated 5 / 5 stars

wow that was tight!!!!!!!!!!!

heheh so funny!!!!!111111



MRUXMRUX

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Not Bad

Not bad for the animation and drawing, is this part of a series your doing or something because i was lost as to what was trying to happen.



XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Amusing and funny

~~REVIEW~~
Now i like this because it starts off very colorfull, but before i get into that, nice job on the start menu, with the characters and all, now as we get into the toon, the {VOICES} were ok, but seems like you could have some {SUBTITLES} maybe not needed, but seems like it would help and show more effort on your part, Now the characters are very good and differant and while this was a short animation it still gave me a smile and laugh, now i could see you running this as a series of sorts adding more humor, abit longer animations, and introducing new characters, make more random stuff happen thats always a funny blast of moments, but as for this one it was very funny, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it a bit longer, and somewhat more random, more odd characters would sufice, and also {SUBTITLES} wouldnt hurt.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and amusing, could be longer though

~X~


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Douglas99 responds:

Thank ya.


UltraEd12UltraEd12

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice Little Cartoon

The animation was pretty nice and so were some of the jokes. Like you said the voices need a little fixing and you need to talk louder but this gave me a little laugh.



AfterFieldAfterField

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Great, but...

It was good, The animation was decent and the music was fine. But the voice acting ruined it, it was sorta bland and I felt you just conned a few friends into doing it for you after saying "please" 100 times. Also, the breathing into the mic was annoying, it seemed to grab my attention away from the animation.

good luck on later projects, and nice work on this one!


Douglas99 responds:

The audio o nthe next is better actually.