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Dec 21, 2010 | 7:03 PM EST

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Author Comments

Just a short animation. Just a start.

Better audio, go to (coming soon)

Reviews


XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 22, 2010

Amusing and funny

~~REVIEW~~
Now i like this because it starts off very colorfull, but before i get into that, nice job on the start menu, with the characters and all, now as we get into the toon, the {VOICES} were ok, but seems like you could have some {SUBTITLES} maybe not needed, but seems like it would help and show more effort on your part, Now the characters are very good and differant and while this was a short animation it still gave me a smile and laugh, now i could see you running this as a series of sorts adding more humor, abit longer animations, and introducing new characters, make more random stuff happen thats always a funny blast of moments, but as for this one it was very funny, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it a bit longer, and somewhat more random, more odd characters would sufice, and also {SUBTITLES} wouldnt hurt.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and amusing, could be longer though

~X~


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Douglas99 responds:

Thank ya.


lizzytalllizzytall

Rated 5 / 5 stars December 21, 2010

wow that was tight!!!!!!!!!!!

heheh so funny!!!!!111111



Food123Food123

Rated 2 / 5 stars December 21, 2010

omg

why are girls are sticking to the poles?


Douglas99 responds:

Strippers artard....


MRUXMRUX

Rated 4 / 5 stars December 21, 2010

Not Bad

Not bad for the animation and drawing, is this part of a series your doing or something because i was lost as to what was trying to happen.



UltraEd12UltraEd12

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 21, 2010

Nice Little Cartoon

The animation was pretty nice and so were some of the jokes. Like you said the voices need a little fixing and you need to talk louder but this gave me a little laugh.