Fallen by Jaybell
Author Comments
This is my first big flash project. It's about an angel and demon falling in love. I'd love some feedback, everything was drawn in Flash 8 with a mouse and I'm still learning so be gentle. The music is a public domain piece the title is at the end. Hope you like it, I think it turned out pretty good for one of my first tries. :)
PS: if anyone knows how to stop the music once the animation is done, let me know. everything I tried didn't work :/
Reviews
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 21, 2010
Nice :)
I love Wanderer! :) And the story too ;)
Thank you
Rated 0.5 / 5 stars December 21, 2010
A poorly animated forbidden love story...
Although I like the concept of a forbidden love between a fallen angel and a devil, I am truly disappointed by the lack of effort put into the visuals and animation. It takes away all of its value.
Newgrounds is extremely serious about the quality of the content in the Flash Portal. I strongly suggest that you keep that in mind and think carefully before submitting Flash animation and/or games in the future.
you didn't give me anything constructive to work with. I rate your review a 1.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars December 21, 2010
Nice
I dont kno much about flash, all i know is that i watch them. But It could have been a little longer. But it was cute and I liked it. You did a whole lot better than some folks. Great Job for your first time!
thank you
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars December 21, 2010
Nice music
I don't know why but this reminds me of Devildoll and Candy by Joe Sparks.
I can't see no Radiskull though ...
I'll have to check that flash out I've never heard of it, thanks for your review
Rated 1.5 / 5 stars December 21, 2010
It wasn't terrible...
Word of advice, remember that your audience is mostly male. We don't exactly appreciate gay love stories.
you know I'm a female, right?