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Massive thanks to Tom for the front page spot and general support!
My first completed Flash Cartoon, 8 months in the making! The first in a planned series about about a man who's lived a completely sheltered life style travelling to the city on a whim.
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Too slow, though Generally OK!
The voice acting is Okay, but the sound quality could need some work, probably get a new mic IMO?..
Also you need to write more to the story, instead just realizing something you thought of in a whim try writing more to it, some more guidlines a little more intricate storyline, and try to give the main character more personality make him unique and try to get the storyline running a little faster..
Also give the other people more personality as well.. Instead of hiding behind a tired 'sigh' let them explain more like "But I think it's cool, I could even though need more people around and new friends?" Or something like that..
Need more work in general.
Just my 5 cents man ^^
At any rate, pretty good art, you've got the skills, you just need more work in what you want to portray and create, and the way you do it~ :D
I definitely agree I need to make the next episode faster paced...but I don't really think the midget man had to voice that he's lonely for the point to get across. Part of it is that he's kinda just realising while he's saying it that he doesn't really have any friends or anything, and yeah, I thought it's funny that Chad basically just shows no reaction to it. But it's your opinion obviously!
Thanks for reviewing.
like this flash
like the way you do highlights on your anmations. thought the lil guys voice work was better than chads thats the only issue for me
That is an awfully dark city
Yeah that's true, it looked fine on my laptop screen, but on some actual monitors it's really dark and hard to see. Probably best to turn brightness up when watching.
Don't know how this got to the front page
It's extremely average. The voice acting is okay, but the audio quality is subpar. The animation isn't noteworthy, nor is the styling direction. The pace is too slow as well.
The history is cool (yeah hahah), the artwork is very nice, the expressions when he is with the girl its very nice. And the voices are very cool. Nice job man! U should do Chad in the city 2!
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