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Straightforward tutorial, doesn't explain much other than where to click since most of the actions are self explanatory. If not, there's a button at the end of tutorial for submitting questions.
Decent but can be improved
Hmm well this is actually not a bad tutorial, its ok one, there are alot of areas you could have improved on here, one i noticed it is all clumped and crowded up together too much stuff, maybe theres a way you can spread things out abit, as i explain below, you could also use some better use of color and addimg some new elements like borders even some better visuals would be better and show more effort on this, its actually an ok tut but could have more, also just adding more stuff to do but more on a basic way to explain to users, but really for the most of this tut it cameout well, just a few fixes here and there could make it much better, but anyways hope to see more from you real soon.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
things are too sclumped up and crowding eachother, also a fresher color theme would be nice adding borders, and fresher looking buttons would look better and overall improve on this one,
An ok tutorial, could be somewhat improved with suggestions made.
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