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well the tetx was to fast to read. But i did like the sound affects in it i hope you work on it so i can see the final one!
I'm sorry. I wish I could give you a better score, but there's simply nothing here that makes it good. There's a quickly-looping sound of a girl crying, poorly-written sentences that make no sense, and poor recycled animation. Maybe the next one will be better... first, learn to write dialogue properly.
sry man that didn't make any sense and some parts r 2 fast and other r 2 slow and i don't want to comment about the sounds
what a waste of time
not good in shorts words
This has potential, you need to add more frames cause it moves by to fast, have voice overs, the crying sfx was annoying as hell, make it longer, more epic, more zombies, What the hell happened to the one guy with the green bandna, and take out the instructions of the preloader, Otherwise the only thing was good was the art :)
P.S. hope this helps you :)
A short film about a park bench
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