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My old version had dodgy sound and there were a few adjustments. Hope you like it. This is my version of camron23 and trixen's idea but with half decent animation.
Will ge great with work
Ok, 5 stars for a funny concept and lyrics. Unfortunately, the negatives are poor quality sound (I had to listen a few times to catch some of the phrases), and the graphics need work. Why not write some more lyrics and extend the song? Redo the sound? Put some time and work into this and it could be great!
Glad I Kept Watching
The voice is T-E-R-R-I-B-L-E..... and how did you spell his name right in the file name but not in the flash itself? hmm...
anyway... before I hit my back button, I realized that your lyrics were pretty funny. and the artwork was good too. I overall like this flash quite a bit. good job!
The video with it and concept is nice. The only thing i didnt like is that it was too short and i couldnt understand the raps. Maybe if you spoke it normally? good job on the drawing
Should be ALL of the rapsong and the graphics and stuff can be better aswell.
Nevertheless, I really liked it =) HAHA
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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