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This is my first flash I hope you enjoy it.
You should try to make sure that the story flows, and since you are using tweens, try to make it so the characters can blink and what not to give more animations.
The texts were just way too slow, and really slowed everything down.
Good start, and can't wait to see what you come out with next.
Like it as a first flash.
Each scene seems too long but overall once anyone gets past that its good flash. Good job and cant wait for a sequel.
Very slow transitions
The power point style prevents me from getting into the animation. Perhaps voice acting or subtitles might have been better for presenting the story. For a first flash, pretty good. Practice and you pick a few techniques here and there.
Good for your first flash
The grafic's were ok and this is pretty good for a first attempt
ps. if zombies takeing over the world is the end of the world dose makeing an antidote cause the end of the end?
Health Reminder 3: The Unfixable Thought Machine
This is oil story... The real trend of the world. How Tuk uses oil to solve his problems?
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