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Dec 14, 2010 | 10:58 PM EST

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This is my first flash I hope you enjoy it.

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FinalFantasyFablesFinalFantasyFables

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars December 21, 2010

Good start

You should try to make sure that the story flows, and since you are using tweens, try to make it so the characters can blink and what not to give more animations.

The texts were just way too slow, and really slowed everything down.

Good start, and can't wait to see what you come out with next.



Aylward2233Aylward2233

Rated 4 / 5 stars December 18, 2010

Nice

Like it as a first flash.



Wolf1777Wolf1777

Rated 3 / 5 stars December 15, 2010

Not Bad

Each scene seems too long but overall once anyone gets past that its good flash. Good job and cant wait for a sequel.



HelioskingHeliosking

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars December 15, 2010

Very slow transitions

The power point style prevents me from getting into the animation. Perhaps voice acting or subtitles might have been better for presenting the story. For a first flash, pretty good. Practice and you pick a few techniques here and there.


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Giant-Robot-PenguinsGiant-Robot-Penguins

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 15, 2010

Good for your first flash

The grafic's were ok and this is pretty good for a first attempt

ps. if zombies takeing over the world is the end of the world dose makeing an antidote cause the end of the end?


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