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It was a good training.
Well this was more cute then anything else, kinda on the short end though, but you could improve on this like you could make it bounce in alot more areas more scene selections and overall differant places to give the flash itself a more longer and fuller feel, but i must say yyou made some nice animation with the art and especially the animation which i like so props to you just wish there was more there.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more scenes let the character jump all around into new scenes and stuff
needs more scenes and more places to jump
Cheers for the review mate, i'm gonna make it longer now. I'm gonna do some extra training on the 12 principles of animation, so i hope the next one is gonna be better and more entertaining.
Not bad, not bad.
Your description says you did this as training, its shows a good understanding of flash and is a nice, short and enntertaining loop. Keep at it and you'll produce something great in the future, I have no doubt.
Woah, thanks a lot for the words, it really motivated me, i might try some classic animation after that. Thanks a lot!
Charming little test loop
It's got some nice animation and a charming little sack thingie. So an 8 out of 10. xD
Hey, thanks!!! It was just a random test but i really liked the result, i wasn't expecting someone to actually like it. Thanks for the 8 :)
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